Into the Ocean - Comments

I loved the third chapter and how she gave in in telling him her name.
I also loved that they both played the piano.
Great Chapter, Logan! =)

I want to know more about the ghost girl.!

This story is really awesome. I've been looking up ghost stories on Mibba, and this one caught my eye.I know it only has two chapters, but from what I've read, it's pretty interesting.

My only quip would be that things seem to have been moving a bit fast in the second chapter, what with him seeing the ghosts and accepting them and such. That's just a personal opinion, however. :)

I'm going to go subscribe, and I hope you keep writing!

I love your writing style on this story.
Nice second chapter. It makes me want to know more about the ghost.

Beautiful update. I got a little teary-eyed

I looooooove it :D
I'm so subbing :)

I loved it. Can't wait to read more.

Hot Mess:

I like it :cute:
I am subscribing. Oh, and just an fyi, you put Clare as the wife's name the first time you mention her and Clara all of the times after that.

Me fix. Me fix. :cute:

I like it :cute:
I am subscribing. Oh, and just an fyi, you put Clare as the wife's name the first time you mention her and Clara all of the times after that.