The Aftermath Of Losing The Savior - Comments

HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this story may be sad, but i REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY.....REALLY lke it!!!!!

~Skittlez~ (x's,o's)

Another beautiful chapter that brought me to tears the part with the left over skittle made me so sad anyways this story is the BEST!

OMG this is the Best! and dude i like never cried over a story=] Man that was beautiful

still kicks ass :)
but it's very sad. POOR GEE *balls* and POOR REST OF MCR *balls some more* POOR GEE'S MOMMY *balls more* POOR FANS *balls even more*! :'(

I love this.
A lot.
Okay, so it kinda bums me out a bit, but it's awesome.
:]

still awsome :)
more?

it's sad :( but a relly good story :)
more?

Update?!?!

Ok, first off I want to apologize for taking so long to read your updates, busy busy busy in my home =P

But anyways, I'm really getting into your story but I still think you need a wee bit more detail, but overall you're doing an awesome job. I'll be waiting for more.

;)

oh please write more!!!

Angelic Forces:

Alright, I've read and to be honest I haven't seen good potentional or a good or original plot in a while now (I'm talking about someone I don't know too =P). The idea of this story somewhat excites me a little and I'm curious to know more. However, I do have a pinch of advice for you - try putting a little more detail, like you really were Gerard. It'll make your readers skin crawl trust me.

I will be keeping an eye on this story to see where it goes. ;)

Thanks, and I wanted to add more to the first chapter before posting it but I couldn't really think to add more, but this story is one of mine from INO and I have a lot already written but I think I'll fix those first before I post more so thank you :D

Alright, I've read and to be honest I haven't seen good potentional or a good or original plot in a while now (I'm talking about someone I don't know too =P). The idea of this story somewhat excites me a little and I'm curious to know more. However, I do have a pinch of advice for you - try putting a little more detail, like you really were Gerard. It'll make your readers skin crawl trust me.

I will be keeping an eye on this story to see where it goes. ;)