The Great Escape. - Comments

I really like this. It is so cute, how she was inside and the boys were really worried about her having ran away.

Randy Orton.:

I'd say this wins 1st place :file:

You, my friend, were correct.

And I agree, I'm not really sure how someone could comment this by saying something so trivial as "I like this". You really deserve a bigger comment than just that, because your writing makes me so intrigued that "I like this" just doesn't seem to sum everything up.

First of all, and although I have already told you this before, I love how you wrote Matt and Brian as children. None of the other entries did that, which I found adorable and creative and brilliant all in one. You captured their personalities really great, and just thinking about them as kids made me go: "AWWWW." Just a little bit.

One of my favorite parts of this was how the boys were freaking out because they couldn't find Noelle (great name, by the way). And how when they finally found her, she was just sitting on the couch inside watching television. That's something that I would definitely expect out of someone that young-- not really thinking about worrying other people, just worrying about what you're doing and where you're at.

And how they apologized to her at the end. And how they all ended up getting in trouble. It was all just done perfectly! I'm serious. I know you said that it wasn't your best work, but it sure didn't show. I thought the whole thing was really great.

Congratulations on placing first!

^ How can you just comment saying "I like this"

DUDE, THIS IS SO FACKING CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWWWWWWWWWWWW<3333333333333333333333333333333333333
I got scared when they couldn't find her, but then the whole time she was in the living room, lmfaooo. That reminds me of me, hahaha. AMAZING, I'd say this wins 1st place :file:

I like this. :)