Brains? - Comments

there are definitely not enough zombies on mibba, please continue..

....WOAH! You seriously have to continue this...

Woooow. I am slowly being more and more gobsmacked at the astonishingly astonishing number of amazing author and authoresses. Great job on the first chapter. *rushes to improve self writing*

I must say I have heard this story before and it was and still remains amazing or so the first chapter is very interesting at first when I read it aloud with my brother he thought it was a trip to Disneyland and then I corrected him and he was like oh well I was way off. This story is going to be Astonishing I feel as if it has already stunned me :) hurry up and write the next chapter zilly!!

lol wow its odd how i found this story after i got home from watching zombieland >_< anywayyy
im liking this so far....update soon

xTanei

Erm...I suck at giving constructive criticism. I couldn't find any obvious errors, it sounds like it's going to make for an interesting story. *subscribes*

Yay!! Its finally posted. I'll be writing up the next chapter. And this new comment section for leaving the first comment is cool!!

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Oh, and the last sentence of chapter one needs to be edited. :cute:
And you got characters exactly how they would act in real life. Nice! I just wish this dream/story would come true. Hehehe. :tehe:

xoXO
zilly
The chapters to the story won't always be on time even if we post them monthly. But please be sure to read the updates and entries posted. Thanks and you're awesome. ;) ThePoint and I appreciate you very much. :arms: