I Cried Out With No Reply - Comments

*pokes you*

I love this! "He seems nice. I hate him." Oh do i know how Kayden feels! UPDATE SOON!!

i just clicked on this story cuz of the name... it's like one of my most favorite songs ever and i haven't ever met someone who knew it before they knew meee... so i'm definately giving this story a try :DDD

I really really like this so far. Update soon! :D

*Subscribed*

Thanks for all the comments guys! :cute:

i love it! update soon

Freaky, I KNOW A HOT GUY IN STAPLES xD

(Nice work too =P)

wooooooow.

:lmfao :lmfao :lmfao
Penis.

One more spelling error: Gays are sunned and beaten.
I think you wanted to use shunned.
And Staples should be capitalized.
Do you want me to beta this for you?

I liked the chapter, can't wait for more!

I noticed one spelling error in the summary: Years ago he said something that tore him away from his only friend, and the day later his parents devorced.
It's spelled divorced.
And a grammar error in the first chapter: Kayden Shut the spiral book and threw it across the room.
shut should be lowercased
But other than that, it was good. I'm interested and subscribing. :cute:

I actually love it a lot already.
So update soon.

hey. i like it. it sounds pretty cool. love to see were it goes.

oooohhh this sounds really good so far! :D
i'd love to see where you take this *subscribes*
update soon, yes?