And She Was Found Black and Blue - Comments

One shot for one shot.

Ahhh. This... this made me all sad. Which I think is actually a good sign, because the whole plot is a little... I don't know, cliche isn't the right word, the plot is just... sort of overused? A bit? Anyway, what I wanted to say is that you wrote it in such amazing way I could care less whether I have read about this idea million times before. You made it seem so painfully real, and everything just seemed... almost like a story from newspaper, you know? It was real.

My most favourite part was the very beginning, the flash-back. So beautifully written. Good job!

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I loved it. Absolutely loved it.

Little did Curtis know, Kat was never going to show up.

That line gave me chills.

Excellent job! :cute:

This story was absolutely brilliant. Definitely one of the best physical abuse and bmth stories I've read.
It was good to see that Kat had some form of support that made her delay the suicide slightly, though it would have crushed Curtis to find out when he turned on the news that day.
This was really good, I hope you win.
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