Save Tonight - Comments

Awwww...... he thinks she sexy!!!!!!!
Tee hee...
Love it definitely.
I don't think I could ever hate it! :P
Contrustive criticism that might help would be to keep the description, but a story needs dialogue too. Maybe just throw some of that in there. *Shrugs*
Not sure if that helps, but whatever.

Keep it up the good work! I really like it!

<3 Kat

YAY!!!!!!!!!! SEQUEL TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I find it really good, so far. Emery seems like such a cutie pie.
Her situations is seriously messed up. Poor girl.
I, like, choked on my spit when you said that her dad was in the prostetution cirlce - totally did not see it coming .... or maybe I did... Nonetheless, it made me laugh.
I like it so far. Very descriptive.
Keep up the good work, amigo!!!!

PS - I thought the random spanish was highly necessary.
PPS - And while was AWOL, I missed your story. :(

hey! sorry i didn't comment sooner! my comp wouldn't ever load the stories page... i gots a new comp ad now i can read your story! I still love this story... i hope you update soon X)
Love,
Chel

OMG!!! I'm sooo glad you are doing a sequel!!! I love you mre now! haha >.< keep up the awesome job girlie!! today was a super amazin' day, so i must spread my happiness around! i'll catchya later. Peace out and rock on,
Michele!