Chicago Lights & the Jersey Shore - Comments

omg that was just... so perfect. i loved it. i'm SOOOO glad i read this. It was... wow for lack of better words -perfact. im in shock.... in shock and grinning like a moron. Nice job

Okay, so, this story was recced to me on the story finders thread by Lena, because I wanted to read a really good Gabe/William story, and she said it was one of her faves. :tehe:

So much ugly. That made me die with laughter :lmfao Not literally of course, otherwise you wouldn't be getting this awesomesauce comment. :hand:

“You wouldn’t give me your liver? I thought you loved me.”

“Well, uh, I kind of need it to live, darling.”

“Wouldn’t you give me part of it?”

“. . . is that possible?”

“Probably not.”

Also made me die :file: I do tend to overlook the deeper parts, I think. The funnies are funny though :XD And obviously I have the intellegence of a ten year old. :mrgreen:

That secks was secksy. I never have anything to say about sex scenes because I'm too busy enjoying reading them rather than figuring out what I'm going to say about them in the comments.despite the fact that I barely comment anything. That bit about the Spanish was funny, though; where William couldn't think of anything English to say, but it wasn't the time to ask Gabe about Spanish. Gabe's Spanish is sexy :yah [just thought I'd add that.]

“That’s dangerous. Your driving sucks bad enough without me sucking your cock.” :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao

I loved the ending. It was really quite sweet. I thought he was gonna end up going back to Chicago with both of them heart broken but you didn't make it like that and that made me happy.

I know this comment means so little, considering how many you must get every day, and I did kinda waste 30 seconds of your life, but I just wanted to let you know how brilliant I thought this story was :cute:

AND YES, I'M AWARE I'M A YEAR LATE

Ohwow. I know this was written ages ago, but goodness, what a good story. Everything was just so Gabilliam and perfect, from the witty banter to the internal conflict to the sex to the happy ending. You are a really really brilliant writer and thank you so much for sharing your talent. :arms:

Dude, this was amazing. Love it :]

your_pretty_face:

You already know i love it. I told you I love it.
But now I guess everyone else can see that I love it?
And... I think you can donate parts of your liver, actually.

Oh, probably.
But it's Gabey.
And he was drunk.

You already know i love it. I told you I love it.
But now I guess everyone else can see that I love it?
And... I think you can donate parts of your liver, actually.

Awww......... I really wanted more. *pouts* btw my name is Dana.

TheXEmoXGirl:

This is amazing Dru! I just love how you write. You just lure the reader in with your usage of langauge. It's just simply perfection! Are you going to write more soon? I would love to read more. This is a good story.

It's a one-shot...

This is amazing Dru! I just love how you write. You just lure the reader in with your usage of langauge. It's just simply perfection! Are you going to write more soon? I would love to read more. This is a good story.

It's linked on my page (:

You always manage to amaze me over and over again. I love your oneshots - you captured two lives in a single-chapter story. That takes talent. I laughed so much during this story, plus the sex scene was... in lack of a better word - hot. I've never read anything with this pairing and much like Boyscout, you turned me into a fan. xD

“You wouldn’t give me your liver? I thought you loved me.”

“Well, uh, I kind of need it to live, darling.”

“Wouldn’t you give me part of it?”

“. . . is that possible?”

“Probably not.”

“Then no.”

Like, the most perfect comical relief ever.

“Ahem.” The younger raised an eyebrow. “Those have to be off for you to fuck me.”

What worries me the most is the fact I can really see William saying that. >.< And raising his eyebrows cockily in the process. xD

Which is better? The guy who loves you to death, who fucks you in the airport parking lot because he can’t wait to touch you, the guy who calls you crying because he can’t do what he thinks you want so much? Or Chicago? Chicago never loved you back, Will.”

The last line in my quote. I can't do much but to show you my favorite parts because there's no con-crit to be given for this story. You did everything right, Dru, as pretty much always.


Chicago couldn’t kiss him like this.

God, Dru...what I'd give to have half of your talent. This was, by far, my favorite of anything you've ever written. I was seriously about to cry...
-Mary

goddamn you and your perfect last
lines. they seem to tie everything up
into a nice little slashy bundle!! and
somehow you always have the right
amount of humor mixed with well
written sex scenes and cute lines.

i like gabe/william... gabilliam. :]

Catastrophic Hymns:

That last line choked me up. I was seriously choking.. I loved it, Dru.

It was perfect.
Honestly, I'm lazy, and my comment will suck, but I really loved that. Gabe/William is like, the most perfect couple ever. I love how you created the tension via William or Gabe moving, and I love William's ultimatum at the end.
Perfect.
Fuck, William is beautiful...

^
-giggles-
I was surprised how well it turned out. I didn't know the characters too well.
[Although it helps when your fiance has a hard-on for your lead.]
I actually take it as a compliment when people "like" my sex scenes. How much of a perv does that make me? Oh gosh.

This is the first Will/Gabe story I've ever read. I don't really know much about Gabe, or Cobra Starship, but I do love William.

You've made me a fan of this fandom...and I know nothing about the guy doing all the fucking! :tehe:

Your writing always amazes me Dru, I hope to get as good as you. Not like you, but your such a great writer. Your up there on the list of one of the favorite Mibba authors.

OK, ok, enough with the kiss ass-ness. You def. got the humor down. I mean, it wasn't 'bust a lung' hilarious, but it had that cute humor thing going on. I just love the way they are together, and even when they're not together. The way you made their characters, so different, yet they go together perfectly. Just makes this story all the more brillant.

The sex...was awesome. I love it when a story makes me horny. And [all] yours do. [Sorry...too much info, yeah?] Car sex?! God, could that get ANYMORE sexier? Gabe has to get those pants off quicker next time. ;]

The last line fit so fucking well. I was grinning like an idiot. :tehe: I know how hard it can be to chose between two things you love, but William made the right choice. You can't have sex with chicago.

Another beautiful, fucking sexy, one-shot...I think I'm gonna go read it again.

^
Oh dear goodness me.

When I saw this, I thought of this story.



-giggles-

Chibi:

That silly dick, William....Jersey IS beautiful, I've seen it with my own two little animated eyes. You just have to look hard enough.

This one was...sweet. Yeah, it was also hot and sticky, but there was a definite saccharin aftertaste. Are you feeling all right, Druski? I don't remember ever reading anything from you quite this....romantic before.

-giggles-
It was an anniversary present for my fiance.
It had to be romantic.

That silly dick, William....Jersey IS beautiful, I've seen it with my own two little animated eyes. You just have to look hard enough.

This one was...sweet. Yeah, it was also hot and sticky, but there was a definite saccharin aftertaste. Are you feeling all right, Druski? I don't remember ever reading anything from you quite this....romantic before.