I Fear I Might Break - Comments

Please maka a sequal.

Aawwwww,
this was so cute C':
I loved it <3

i luvvd then end. cnt wait for your next story!:)

i loved it!!!!!!
the ending was super cute!!!!
can't wait to read your new story

oooo ooo more! wait end.... hold on!!! OMG I LOVED IT!!!

ohwow. that was a really sweeet ending!!! will you post a link at the end of this story when you put up your next slash??

ZOMG!
I loved it.
*dabs tear*
that was amazing, hun. just amazing :D

-kayt

Aww it's the end? It was so good! I loved the ending. I love the cliche ones :)

Finals are hell; mine are next week as well. Luck on those. Also AMAZING ending! I loved it. I loved how she just let Hayley lead...: ) : ) : )

I'm sad it's over.

Leave me a comment when you post your new one?

more!!!! i is obssessed!!

I just read this whole thing. It's really good and I like it a lot :)

awwwwwwww........
I wish it wasn't.... but i can't wait til the end cuz i want to see what's gonna happen.
:D

-kayt

ohno!!!! that would suck.....hayley......anyways, so this makes me seem pretty slow, but i JUST realized the way you narrate some of sins thoughts like an out of body experience.. i think its a great idea, and it makes your writing that much more fun to read. Update soon!

wow this is really good,i like it and can't wait for more
*subscribes*
the last part was so sad,i was hoping Hayley would've heard her :/
update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!

haha thts great!!!!! POOR SIN!!! tht would suck shes gonna have 2 say it alll again and look like a rere!! lol luv the update ;)

Okay, so this my first comment on this story and I just want to say that this story is amazing. It is the perfect combination of sweet/happy and angsty/dramatic. I really enjoy reading it and honestly think it's the only good Hayley/OFC story that I have read. I have been searching for good ones and can't seem to find one that is as good as yours. You are an excellent writer. You give good detail without rambling and the characters you have created are very believable; I really like them all, but my favorites are Damien, Sin and Nurse. Other Hayley/OFC stories I have read are either poorly written or just overly dramatic/angsty and their original characters aren't as believable. I'm honestly a little sad to see that this story is almost over, but I really am looking forward to the next Hayley/OFC that you mentioned at the end of one of the previous chapters. I'm also looking forward to the conclusion of this one, so please update as soon as it's convenient for you.

Was not expecting Hayley to not be there, awh. : ( Loved it.

Oh no... :(

Wow, Hayley picked the worst time to go to the bathroom!

And yay! An update! I've been waiting for it!

Now, if only you updated again, say tonight or tomorrow.....