Watching. - Comments

Favorite pairing ever :D agrees wit princess more please :)

^ double post:S

I can't write so short at all, and I could never write something great and short like you do either.

I love how you manage to press in so many emotions in just 187 words! And Ole is just how I picture Ole if he had been in that situation: not mushy, crying and begging or something but still hurt and sad.

One of my favorite pairs too:tehe: Maybe because they look so alike at the Termination Bliss era:tehe:

Murderprincess:

Am I greedy if I demand more? :tehe:

I second that;)

If you are wondering about my overall thoughts: I LOVE THIS PIECE!

I read this reaaaally quickly and I will leave just a quick comment, since I'm busy and all,. but I still feel like this deserves a comment. even if it's short.

I really like how you manage to express stuff in such a short space (I did mention this already, didn't I?), how you hint many stuff and leave space for reader's imagination, yet it's not missing anything. kinda. if that makes sense?

I'm not Ole/Emil fan, tbh, but I did enjoy this, maybe because the feelings were not returned? and I really enjoyed how you pictured Ole's feelings in that very not cliche way. because Ole is pretty much anything but cliche. at least, that's how it looks to me. :tehe:

good job!

Oh my goddess ♥
An Ole x Emil Slash, even though it's disturbingly short! One of my favourite pairs they are so loveable with each other, it makes me want to drag them and put them together ♥

Erm, back to the story xD even though it's so (disturbingly xD) short, it's really nice. I just like it, because you managed with expressing all the feelings in such a short fic. That's just awesome, since I'm the person that writes 2000 words of pure nonsense sometimes xD So, cheers for being able to keep it short and precise but not leaving out any important things.

It's just loveable, I love your style of writing. And those short sentences just fit perfectly in. They kinda describe how Ole is feeling too ♥

And the ending is just loveable as well. Awesome! Just awesome! I cannot even tell what is so awesome about it, but it's just those... small expression like Just Ole and just Emil that put so many feelings into it. All this sadness and the feeling of being hopeless!

And btw... I wanna stab Emil right now! He's so evil, forgetting about that Ole isn't feeling fine >__>° *hits Emil and pets little happy Bone* :3

Am I greedy if I demand more? :tehe: