Human Connect to Human - Comments

AAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! The ending is SSSOOOOOO sweet!!!!!!

Nice story!! I love when Bill blurts out "Are um.. you going to fuck me or uh.. the other way around...?"
its so goddamn sexy!!

By the way. I looooove that picture. I want to jump Tom's bones.

"His heart was racing and his hands were sweating." == First thing I thought of was Molly's sweaty hands.

Bill knew what was on his mind. "Do.. do you want to have sex?" == Way to be extremely blunt.

His brother's mouth broke from his to let out a moan. "Ooh, that feels so good." == That made me giggle and I don't know why.

He took off his own shirt and pants and dropped them to the floor then returned to Bill's body. == I am sure that that was easy due to the fact that Tom wears really baggy pants.

Tom moved to take off his sweatpants and did so expertly, mentally thanking Bill for changing out of his skinnies, which would have been a bear to get off. == :lmfao

It hurt so good. == yes.

His cold hand felt devilishly sensational. == I haven't laughed so hard at something in a story that hard.

"I want you to er.. do it.. to me," he blushed. == GOD DAMN. I like when Bill fucks Tom!

until he found the bottle of lube he hadn't had to use since he was in his early teens. == hahahaha. Was it Strawberry-kiwi?

Bill couldn't help but stare. He'd always thought his brother had been gifted == HA. HA.

"In me. Please," == Oh my god.

Bill's body was so fun to play with. == You would know. ~~

sucking gently for just a moment on Tom's lip ring. == God, I wish I could do that.

"Because I was hoping it would be with you." == How cliche and cute.

I am so sure that you enjoyed this comment lolz.

I thought that was greatly written! :D Great job! :) I liked it a lot! :D