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  • a7x princess

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    it was really cool!can't wait for the next update,also the part about her changing in the sleeping bag,I would have done the same thing;)
    December 16th, 2009 at 08:36pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I still want to know what Brian is up to...
    December 2nd, 2009 at 12:49am
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    good update,please don't try to kill the kid!LOL can't wait for more!
    December 1st, 2009 at 07:25pm
  • MsSynnieVengeance

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    YAY LOVED THE UPDATE
    December 1st, 2009 at 04:11am
  • NothingIsPermanent

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    i am totlly confused... and i LOVE it<3
    November 30th, 2009 at 09:55pm
  • CrossMyHeart_94

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    <3<3<3
    I LOVE IT
    <3<3<3
    xox
    November 21st, 2009 at 09:57pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    what the heck is their deal...
    November 19th, 2009 at 03:24am
  • alq14fred

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    lovin it
    November 19th, 2009 at 01:08am
  • MsSynnieVengeance

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    Weeeeeeeee Loved this chapter xD hahaha that damn bee costume lmao
    November 18th, 2009 at 08:54pm
  • Anxiety

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    I need the next chapptterrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 18th, 2009 at 08:39pm
  • Anxiety

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    Reminds me of the song I'm Still Breathing by Katy Perry (:
    November 18th, 2009 at 08:03pm
  • MsSynnieVengeance

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    I really really like this story.... its awesome
    November 17th, 2009 at 11:31pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I'd really like to know what the heck is going on with Brian and what these roses are supposed to mean...if no one is gonna tell her then maybe she should just confront Brian about it!
    November 17th, 2009 at 07:21pm
  • a7x princess

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    really good update!
    November 17th, 2009 at 04:34pm
  • CrossMyHeart_94

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    Its amazing If you ask me, definatly keep it up ! :)
    November 17th, 2009 at 02:53pm
  • Lurking_shadow

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    Hmm
    Well I love this story. and can't wait for the next chapter.

    Just going to take a stab at the plot and say Brian is either a vampire or werewolf. He still loves Ruby but said he didn't to save her from him but now he thinks he is back in control and loves her too much to stay away. Jason is an enemy of some sort. Brian knows he is trouble but doesn't have enough control to hang around at the party without causing a scene. Ruby and Brian at some point will be back together but it goes horribly wrong and ends in Ruby being hunted by Brian. If that is the case can I ask that you try to kill Ruby? =) I just love unhappy endings. well any ending to this story will be unhappy because that would mean there is no more to read =D.

    Anyway I have rambled enough about my thoughts on this. Hopefully I didn't just give away your plot line for the next two months =D If I have feel free to delete this comment.

    Keep up the great work I love it, lets see Ruby get a bit burned by Jason =P
    November 1st, 2009 at 07:09am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    if Brian can move on then so can Ruby...unless Jason is a total creep then she just needs to find someone else lol
    November 1st, 2009 at 02:22am
  • bloodravyn

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    ooooh, is he a vampire or a werewolf?
    October 31st, 2009 at 10:40pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    cant wait to see how Halloween goes...
    October 29th, 2009 at 02:39am
  • dragonschild

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    I want more NOW! So update please.
    October 27th, 2009 at 05:22pm
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