i reaaaally loved this. it was as original as the lyrics permitted, in all fairness. it was divided, but in a logical way; no meaningless asterisks that are put out of laziness when a few adjoining sentences will do. it was cute, and you knew he was gonna give it his all and fail, but it was just worth reading to see if he makes it out alive. way too cute. i loved it, truly.
congrats on third place :D