okay so as long as you promise to update im hooked but if you dont update im probably just gonna forget so yeah i like it its very.....uhm......realative like i can realate to it :) good job. more? please?
Great chapter. It's like she hates love, like or affection. She hates that she feels it or something. Don't be afraid to update. Your readers don't bite... Much.
That was an incredible introduction. The summary and the intro both reflect the intention of the story, and I think I may be hooked. This has the potential to utterly amazing. With such an engaging and fascinating beginning, I have no doubt that this story will quickly become one of my favourites. I can't wait to see where you take this.