I Should Have Never - Comments

this is rather amazing.

Oh My God. Simply Amazing. Ive never read anything so beautiful. I think i nearly stopped breathing when he said that he cheated on her (The last line) I Love the part you said about business being a game; you win or loose, and Love is different, you almost always loose. And followed by that you said that he should go into business, I had a good laugh there :] My favorite line was when he said:

"The taste of every lie still lingerd in my mouth."

That was truly beautiful. He says everything that he shouldnt have done, knowing it wall all wrong, and how shes better off without him. And how much he's sorry. This is really beautiful :] I Love it.

That was breathtaking. I love your style of writing so much, just because you can write emotion so well. You don't have to mess with words or dialogue to get your point across, and that's what makes your writing so gorgeous sometimes. :D I just loved this.

You captured the lyrics perfectly. I loved it.