Clash of the Clichés - Comments

I love it!!! I was a bit skeptical about how this would go, but I love it and I love Ace!! I like Axel too, but he's crazy man..

I love the story please keep updating its amazing

upload soon... love the story, already want her to be with her bestfriend's brother =)

I honestly love this please continue writing =D

Well, that was...violent.
I feel bad for Evelyn.
She just can't catch a break, can she?
~Chelsea~

I lalaluv it. ♥
If ever Evelyn does break-up with Connar, I have absolutely No idea who she's going to end up with.
OMG is Vanessa going to die?! I hope not! I want Ace and Matt to kick her a**. lol.
There are a few wrong spellings in some chapters FYI. But not really important.
Just keep the story heat up!! Update Soon. Ok?? xD

.aLySsA.

i like this story...
but honestly i dont like the main character...
as much as i like Axel..
she's to weak and refuses to stand up for herself.
and the bitch, Vanessa had it coming. :)
good job.
:] i think your going to make her get with someone no expecting it to be.
you just seem like the type to make everyone think one thing...
and then bam! you change it. loll
:DDDDD

That whore!
:(
She should get arrested or something.
How did no teachers see that?
~Chelsea~

Yay another update :)
I love thiis storry!
God damn Vanessa. What a bitch! Grrr, she pisses me off, I kinda just wanna punch her (:
I'm waaaaay too tiiired to write more in thiiis comment, if I were more awake, I would write more, but I can't right now. Update soon? Please<3 (:

Haha, feel special: I ONLY EVER comment on a story when it's finished, but what do I know? I'm just a arrogent teenager who could even be a spammer! (xxboobs.com!!!!) (jokes!!!)
so don't be offended, this is creative feedback:
well I love the story idea of beating up all the cliches and then blending them but, I feel the story isn't doing anything but turn into one of these preppy-vomit filled stories.
But again, I'm just retarded.

X- Magenta!

I really like this story :) I hope that somehow ace finds out about vanessa and gives her a taste of what she dishes out. This is different, usually it's the guys that go for the physical bullying and the girls that tear you down emotionally. Vanessa is a capital B (I don't curse) dog.

I hate Vanessa! haha love the story though! update again soon!

i hope she breaks up with connar soon becuz he's such a jerk LOL and i think you did the right choice to no break them up this chap. cuz it would feel rushed. i hope you'll update more..not that im rushing you though :D

yay an update :)
I don't really liike Connar, he seems like a total ass. They should break up next chapter :)
Alex seems liike a cool person, Derek seems pretty cool too. I'm gllladdddd you updated (:
Update again soon? Please? <3 (:

You have to update more! I almost unsuscribed because I thought you weren't going to continue! really like this story♥ hate connar, he sounds like a moron, and perv. I wonder about the breakup scene. Maybe he should become a creepy stalker ex. just a thought. plz update soon♥

update. :)
Nice, four character intros in one update.
Can't wait for the next update.
~Chelsea~

yayy :)
I haven't realized that you had updated! Sorry it took me soo long to realize it, lol :)
Darren is an ass (excuse my language but its true) he needs to get over himselfff.
Update soon please? <3 (:

Darren is such a jerk. Watching (reading) them fight is hilarious. I like how basically everyone is so protective to her. I think she's going to go rebellious and get with the bad boy. But that depends on what happens with connor's best friend *winkwink* You know what, the only thing i totally don't expect you to do is make her stay with the guy she's actually dating. ironic huh. :) update soon :)

love it!!! update again soon! :)

I think the idea of combining all cliches is awesome! I've always kinda hated the not as good copies and especially hated how the character hates them one day and then loves them the next.
It's super creative