Peter Pan and Wendy Turned out Fine, Sure. But What About Lilli?! - Comments

  • annabre

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    This is really cute! I think you should finish it!!
    February 6th, 2012 at 06:37am
  • Fire and Ash.

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    Love it!!

    Update Please?!

    Ellie,

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    August 3rd, 2011 at 03:16pm
  • AlexisNicole822

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    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 21st, 2010 at 03:07am
  • xoKelsixo

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    Now he really is Old, Alone and well... Dead hopefully, finally. Great chapter!!! Although, have I missed what Lilli is? Or is that coming??
    September 14th, 2010 at 09:42am
  • xoKelsixo

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    hahahaha Codfish. lol I remember that! Please update soon!!!
    June 1st, 2010 at 09:06am
  • xoKelsixo

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    Yay!!!! update soon please??
    May 26th, 2010 at 11:21am
  • MixedEmotions

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    aww! that was so sad. . . update please! so that i can see what comes next!
    May 15th, 2010 at 07:38am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Peter's such an asshole!!!
    May 13th, 2010 at 12:33am
  • katediplodocus

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    =) YAYA I am soooo nervous for whats gonna happen next!! Please PLEASE update SOON!!!
    May 13th, 2010 at 12:14am
  • xoKelsixo

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    OMG!!! finally some one who thinks Peter Pan is kool! well apart from the ditching her and hitting her part. I like the thing about them both in puberty, that was hilarious! I think that Hook should double cross her though. He's a pirate... one a pirate always a pirate... anyay.. i love the fact how you've changed Wendy's character and made her kinda snitchy...(did you kow the name Wendy was created for the story of Peter Pan?) and they whole idea is great!! please keep writting!!!!!! *subscribes*
    May 12th, 2010 at 12:27pm
  • katediplodocus

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    Peter is being such a jerk!!! I hate him right now! I like how you made Hook a nice person, I knew he hada soft side really!!
    April 16th, 2010 at 06:09pm
  • mickyxx3

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    I love how you took Hook to a whole 'nother level
    April 16th, 2010 at 03:16am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Peter is such a jerk! how dare he hit her!!!
    Update soon<3
    April 16th, 2010 at 01:52am
  • MixedEmotions

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    awesome! I really liked it, except for the part where Peter hit her. . . other than that it was good!!
    April 16th, 2010 at 01:48am
  • ART IS THE WEAPON

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    I love this story.
    And there is a couple reasons why.
    1. I love how you took a different direction with captain hook!
    2. I now want to strangle the fuck out of Wendy (if that is good thing, personaly i think it is)
    3. I want you to continue with this story or I might just have to shank you.
    <(^-^<)(>^-^)>
    April 16th, 2010 at 01:01am
  • Much.Betterr

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    new reader and a new SUBSCRIBER!!
    This is absolutely amazing!
    I love peter pan and this is soooooooooooo creative!
    I feel so sorry for Lilli, she should be with Peter, not Wendy!
    Please update soon!
    *clicks subscribe*
    April 16th, 2010 at 12:45am
  • Simply Mad

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    I love this! :) I simply adore peter pan xD
    March 30th, 2010 at 04:10pm
  • this.city.so.pretty

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    I absolutely loved this chapter!
    March 14th, 2010 at 06:51am
  • Maim.The.Heart

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    I love this! Can you update more?
    March 14th, 2010 at 06:33am
  • this.city.so.pretty

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    I love this!
    But longer chapters, please!
    March 14th, 2010 at 06:16am