The last chapter was really well written! I think it's important to have some chapters where nothing much happens but not to write it as if you don't really care about the chapter and just wanna do the 'fun' stuff. Well done, it was really professional! x
I love this fic. I love the fact that you're using OC's as main characters, yet still bringing back canon characters, nicely done! My thoughts when I clicked on this were: A Weeping Angels fic? AWESOME! It certainly lived up to my expectations. And don't worry about sometimes spelling Angels as Angles. I think everyone does that.
Holy crap. I'm amazed that they didn't take him, that's still rattling my mind. I didn't see any typos by the way, unless I read to fast. I was just so excited :D.