You Were the Umbrella in My Rain - Comments

Omg that was amazing. :O. It made me all sad

"I loved you Ryan I really did." That bit made me have a tear to my eye :P.

I really like this. I can't beleave Ryan would do that to Brendon But Yeah. :(

I think this was well written and well done XD

Wow.
Poor Brendon
And messed up Ryan
I've gotten a lot of entries for this contest written in a similar manner to this, what with depicting the inner band conflict and the reason for the split, but I have to say this is probably one of the best.
It was simple and effective, written pretty much perfectly. I can't think of any con-crit.
Thank you so much for this entry :cute:

There should've been more sex.

[Jokes, of course. It was good.]

AHH!
God damn, that was sad!
But a great one shot, I just wished for a happier ending.
Lol, I loved the quote, "You liked it. Besides, now we can have sex because you’ve had your first kiss." (:
& I was really surprised when I didn't see any comments on this.
Glad to know that I'm the first though. (: