Cold Blood and Sharp blades - Comments

WOW...goryness is so cool. And revenge is definatly sweet!!!!!
I loved it! You should write more of these!!!!!!!

that was awesome :D:D:D:D

that. was.gorey

Hey, I'm still reading this, and I still like it. Seriously, good job. You've inspired me with something.

this is pretty cool, good story plot :) well done x

lol it was my first attempt so... i had no idea tbh, i didnt want to give the whole relationship between the guys and her away, and the swearing, i just, wanted to add it in... sorry!!!!!!!!

wow, that was amazing!!
i love the murderers
i think they happened a bit quick though

debbie x

That was good. Like, wow, really good. I loved the way it was written, and normally, sex scenes make me flinch, but this one was well written and so, this is the first one I didn't flinch at. There was a lot of suspense and action, and it was good. But who were the two guys? I didn't get the relationship between them and her. However, I thought there was a little too much unecessary cursing and some typos, but other than that, I absolutely LOVED the story.

Man that was awesome, really reaky. Good job!

revenge, so so sweet. A great one shot packed with exacting action and dripping with primal rage that makes a person so deadly. conversely though, i didn't catch the relation the two guys had who abducted and beat the heroine, were they friends of the fiance? Crooked cops? Thugs?

very.. very.. very.. AWESOME!!
fuck.. i love the way you write XD

that was really awesome, gotta say

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Oh wow ... bloody xD
Nice. Very nice.

~Fishy~

ooo wowee
it was as the person above says!
Incredible
and everything else she said!!
its awesome!!

Incredible
Fast paced, scary, twisted and very very cool
Good job - you had me hanging on every word
Mary
XXX

*steals comment virignaty*

DUDE! :shock: :shock: :shock:

THAT WAS A AMAZING ONE SHOT!!!!!!!!!
(will you read mine please and leave a comment?)