I really liked this story:D. It fit perfectly with the picture we gave you. I also liked how you describes feelings and such:D. Great job and as Chemical Vengeance said the layout was really pretty:D
:con: First I wanna be a little off-topic and tell you that I loved the layout The story was cute, and I loved how you made colours such a big part of it :D A few mistakes here and there but overall very well done Good job! :D