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  • Jaf19

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    ooops actually die??
    September 12th, 2009 at 05:19am
  • Jaf19

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    AWESOME story lots of feel towards the end I agree did she actually diw with the last sentence??? (I'm addicted to writing and reading)
    September 12th, 2009 at 05:19am
  • Mr Dee.

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    You did quite well :)
    However I felt the last sentence could have had some more added into it.
    Either way
    Well done. :)
    September 6th, 2009 at 08:54pm
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