Gerard The Super Hero - Comments

“Jesus Christ its Gerard the Super Hero, I didn’t think that son of a bitch really existed.”
lmfao...at first I thought it was Frank who said this xDD

I liked it. It was very kewl

Haha, that was awesome, i just read it.
It was amusing XD

That was friggin adorable!!!
:D

this was good. you made it sound like crap when you told me about it.

That was cute.
I love Gerard as a superhero and the way you told the story just made it really adorable and squishy, if that makes any sense.

Aww! So cute!! = D

~Skittlez~ (x's,o's)

I agree with the ghost, though just wanna add that there are some spelling mistakes :) But again, not bad for your first story :D

For your first story this wasn't bad, though I would suggest that you write more of the facts into the story instead of saying them, like at the end, also you could've made it a bit longer since it did not show very much of their relationship, though that's just suggestions ;)
All in all, not that bad, but I didn't really see what this had to do with your picture though except for the fact that it's in your layout :S

I'm not Frerard fan but you managed to write a story that was readable, but I suggest paragraphs, like YOUnique said. But it was a good job at your first story =)

For you first story it was pretty nifty.
But, if I may give you a bit of advice, make paragraphs.
It's far to difficult to read in one big clump.
Other than that, it was good.