Breathe Me - Comments

=] Thank you very much. I appreciate any sort of input, and comments DEFINITELY get me writing faster. OH, I'm glad you enjoy the name *Giggles* I thought so too.. it felt so.. right for his character.
Next chapter should be up soon, and thank you again!

Okay, so it took me long to write a comment, possibly a wannabe review. I'm not so good at writing reviews anymore.[/rant]

Anyways, I apologize for not commenting sooner, seeing as I've been reading this ever since Nikki put the link in her sig.

I like the concept, even though you've taken a lot from Twilight. I don't mind that, though. Before I forget, I must say I love Demitrious. It's so...vampire-like. :mrgreen:
Your writing style is quite simple, yet you reveal a lot. Your descriptions are really good. And the choice of words too. By keeping it simple, you make the story more charming.
Yes, I'm drawn in. I love. I don't know if it's because I'm a huge fan of Twilight and its sequels, but I'll keep on reading this.
Don't give up on this!
I'm looking forward to the next update! :}

Thank you very much! That's absolutely wonderful to hear

i liked it....the descriptions of emotions and locations and people are all very rich and paint a picture. Your writing sounds very sincere and at times flows like poetry. I love it. Some of the best I've read.

That was cool.
Twilightish, with your own personal thing.
Keep writing!

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