Glittering - Comments

Adam Glambert. (200)

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Awwwwwww!!! Oh, I love this! It's so cute!

November 8th, 2009 at 09:55am

Blitzkrieg (100)

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AHH>>>>SQUEEEEE!!!!! nom nom nom :D

October 30th, 2009 at 11:03am

disturbed_peace (100)

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awww... this is so nice.. and i'm ur competition in this contest.. haha..

this story makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.. this contest is heated!! XD

September 17th, 2009 at 11:30am

november rain; (315)

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Aww. First of all, that was the fluffiest story I have ever read. :P

You interpreted your object well! You didn't just have a diamond ring in the story, but you also created metaphors for it. I really like how you mentioned more than just diamonds shining, or diamonds being easily broken, but lots of different metaphors!

I didn't expect that, so good job on the double-interpretation thing you got going on there. If you know what I mean. x] Your descriptions, grammar and spelling were good, too. All in all, I enjoyed reading it a lot. :D Especially since it's slash, but I won't be biased. ;p

Good luck for the contest~! ^^

September 11th, 2009 at 04:07pm

Kitty Emilie (100)

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awwh, you make me cry happy tears!

Agree with Cat, love the way you write fluffy candy, it's so beautiful and cute and make me all weird and warm inside:O

September 7th, 2009 at 09:13pm

twin. (100)

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AWWW!
This made me feel all squishy and warm inside. :XD It was so adorable, and really cuuuteee!

You write fluffy candy so well. :tehe:

September 7th, 2009 at 08:11pm