Forever and Always - Comments

Your stories are always beautiful even when laced with sadness, maybe that's what makes them so good.
I just want you to know that I really liked this and that you wrote it perfectly and that your writing style is truly unique.

And sorry for the story-comments taking so long, we will try to get them done this week :D

So, I finally got around to reading this...
This was really sad. And I really liked it. You wrote it really well.
Seriously. Well done. :cute:

One Shot For One Shot.

This was beautiful. It made me really sad at the end.

My only criticism would be that I didn't get enough detail of the two main characters. Perhaps it's because I wasn't familiar with the fandom, though.

The details were amazing and I could picture each situation. It was extremely well-written and...:cheese:

It was beautiful.

This is absolutley stunning, seriously.
I don't normally read Deathstars stuff, but now I think I should do it more often if they're all as amazing as this.
It really hit a heartstring, and as boychild. said, it should totally win this contest.

You know I love this, and I think it's so sad
Kitten and Greven is just so sweet toghter, and it wouldn't surprise me if Kitten actually fell in love with Greven, but they're friendship is too sweet for me to want that to ever happen. Plus, Kitten belongs to Andy and Greven should only just be his friend that he makes out with every now and then :coffee:

a blond haired and blue eyed little boy. The boy that would look like an angel, only if he wasn't sitting on the floor, banging his fists against the tiles and screaming on the top of his lungs: ”But I want iiiit!“ His mother was kneeling next to him, ignoring the hysterics of her son as she calmly tried to explain why she wouldn't buy him the fairy princess set (includes true fairy wings, a tiara and a wand – everything your daughter ever wished for!).
This is just so epic :XD:XD:XD First of, blond!baby!Kitten is just too adorable. And second, I can so clearly imagine Kitten acting like that when a child, always trying to get what he want - and actually getting it too :tehe: Of course Kitten would want a princess set :XD (I noticed people thinking it's a doll, but I've thought of it more as a custom sort of thing, am I all out in the blue about it? :shifty )
I love the part about him eating snickers too, btw :tehe: It makes me think of my own story the whole time

he just remembered him as the quiet boy that never talked much or played with other children; he instead spent most of the time on his own. Björn's memories of Eric are very clear – he was the loud boy that spent more time with girls than boys.
Quiet!little Björn is sweet :tehe: Of course Kitten would spend time with the girls, playing with dolls and play family :tehe: I love that you show these kind of flash backs of first sight, first meeting, first time talking, and so on, it's so sweet while at the same time showing how different they really are.

While Björn always took so much time to colour the pictures, choosing the crayons carefully to make the pictures look realistic, Eric usually grabbed the pink crayon and used it on everything.
:lmfao -images Kitten coloring everything pink- -dies giggling- :XD That part always makes me giggle way too hard :tehe:

Eric didn't notice Björn at first, but that was nothing new to him. He was usually overlooked. What surprised him, though, was what he saw. He knew Eric as the flamboyant, very confident and very gay boy; not as someone who would cry secretely in the bathroom. He looked so fragile without the usual shield of arrogant confidence.
Poor Björn :XD Thinking about him always wearing too much purple to be normal, I'd believe he always got stared down :XD But yeah, fiction, different to real life -reminds self- Fragile!looking!Kitten is so cute, and sitting and crying for himself, not being normal all too loud and flamboyant, is so cute :arms:

Björn admitted in quiet voice that he never kissed anyone.
-dies giggling- Greven, never kissing anyone? xDDDDD I'm convinced he got his first kiss when being twelve, and that it was he teaching Kitten, though :tehe:

Björn hesitated. ”I'm not gay,“ he said sceptically.

”Neither I am,“ Eric hurried with the answer,
Kitten, you're not fooling anyone. It was obvious already when you were four, just get over it and walk that loooong trip out of the closet :coffee:

Björn nodded eventually, and Eric still thinks it is the best kiss he ever had in his whole life. Björn's lips were soft against his own, none of them had their piercings just yet, when Eric leaned forward and connected their lips.
Aww, so cute. I love that Kitten thinks it's his best kiss even though it's Björn's first time, it's just so full of awness :arms: It took a long time before managing to picture them both without piercing :shifty I never before realized that when I picture Kitten and Greven - any age - they always have their piercings :think:

Then Eric just leaned forward and kissed Björn. And Björn responded, just like Eric wishes he would now, if only Eric dared to kiss him again. He pulled Eric closer, and kissed back hungrily, resting his hands on Eric's sides just above the hem of his boxers. The kiss was clumsy, because they were both drunk and Eric was nervous as if he was going to lose his virginity.

Eric's breath hitched in his throat as Björn bucked his hips forward, pressing his erection against Eric's thigh. A soft moan escaped him as he shifted his thigh, creating friction that got Björn sigh contently against Eric's neck. It gave him courage, and he repeated movement, sliding his fingers down Björn's naked back as he kissed him again.

And then he pushed Björn on his back, pulling his boxers off his hips, and gave him clumsly amateur blowjob. Björn didn't last long, and with his fingers entangled in Eric's raven hair he forced him to swallow.

Eric hates how this was the best sex in his life, even though Björn didn't do anything in return. But Eric didn't care that he was hard and aching, that he had to jack off while Björn turned on his side and fell asleep, oblivious to everything. Because he thought it was all worth it just to know it was him who brought pleasure to Björn.
This whole part deserve to be quoted :tehe: I love that they're so drunk, and that Kitten just kiss Greven all out of sudden like that, and that Greven answers the kiss hungrily. And it's very hottishly cute :tehe: I doubt Kitten ever would manage with giving amateur blow job, but it fits in the story. Greven is so evil even though not meaning for it, just turning around and going to sleep and let Kitten finish of on his own. Evil drunk bastard :grr:

”No... I'm in love with you, Björn,“ Eric said then and that's when it got all wrong.

Björn thought Eric was joking at first, because the whole moment was too cliché to be true. But Eric repeated it again, and again, and when Björn looked away, letting out a somewhat relieved sigh when their friend returned, Eric knew he never should have opened his mouth.
Oh Kitten, why did you have to say that? And stupid Björn! He could have at least said something, talking in through! Not just look away and ignore Kitten and get thankful for their friend getting back :grr:

Eric curled up in his bed that evening, feeling more lonely than ever and crying himself to sleep because Björn didn't reply to any of his text messages and didn't answer the phone either.
This makes me want to just slap Greven D: How DARE he ignore Kitten like that when he have to know how hard it must be to tell a confession like? Doesn't he understand that Kitten feels equal as awful? :grr: I really dislike Björn right now :grr:

And when he's all alone in his room, he has flashbacks of how Björn told him how he loved him, how he said he would always be there for Eric. Forever and always, he said.

Eric wonders if he was just kidding.
He wasn't kidding! He meant it! He better have meant it :grr: But he's just unsure, very unsure. When Kitten means Andy and loses his virginity to him and falls in love it will be all happy again and they will be best friends again.
And it'll be happily ever after -nods-

You better win this contest (and I'll be number two :XD ) or I'll be really angry :grr: :tehe:

:arms:

This was so amazing.

Oh lordy.

I love how you kinda went back into how they met and stuff, and I have to admit that kindergartener!Kitten makes me go all :tehe: :crazy:
I can totally picture him coloring everythign pink, by the way. And wanting a barbie doll. :file:

I'm like Sex.Kitten, btw. I was all But in a good way!

This is just so... real. Omigod. :cheese:

I've kinda gone through a similar thing in a way, and yeah. I love all the descriptions and the details and you got it so right. And so many people have epically failed at it. -nods-

Epic win, love. :arms:

Dear, as I just told you, the story is brilliant <3
I still cannot tell, though, what emotion I want to express xD I wanna slap Björn and I wanna hug Kitten and then I wanna slap them both and hug them both and aw This is so sweet and so sad too, that it makes me go all weird inside from not knowing what to feel really.

I adore your style, it's just awesome ♥ and how you described the development kinda of them both. (btw the image of Kitten being small and wanting to buy a Barbie is just adorable )

This was so sad and nice ♥♥ am I annoying if I ask for more? *blinks*

*sniff* Why are everybody teaming up against me today to make me cry?! First my friend-laughingtears, then murderprincess-happytears, then you-sadtears:O omgno:
It was so sad, but perfectly written as always:3

This made me all sad.
It was really sweet and you captured the characters well, but it made me feel sad at the end as well. This line like pulled on my heartstrings so badly though!

"Eric wonders if he was just kidding. "

Noooooo he wasn't just kidding! :XD

Anyway, as always was really good and cute. (: just how I like it!