Cold - Comments

This is amazing, are all your stories amazing?

My only critism is the layout makes it hard to read.
Other than that, it was awesome!
I like how you kept the dialogue to a minimum.
It really added to the story's mood.
So sad.
But, I like it.
I'll let you know if you win!!

amazing again rose :)
and really, it's the best layout I've seen.
and well-written, as usual ^^

i quite liked this one. i could picture that happening too, in the books.

rosie you are amazing. and so is your writing :) love it, keep up the amazing work xx