Into the Woods with the Dead Bodies - Comments

So this time I chose the story with the most interesting title for me.
I love the banner! And I really like the summary :)
That was some in-depth explaining done by the mother. I would have been very disturbed if I were the child. I think it would be more believable if the kid kept asking about the dead bodies than for the mother to explain further without a prompt.
“If you two don’t stop [fighting] staring at me like I’m a killer, I’m throwing both of you into the woods with the dead bodies.” --- maybe the 'fighting' shouldn't be there?
Cool. I had a feeling it was him. :)

Oh my God, that was so creepy!! O___O

I didn't expect that at all!!

0.0 grandpa's a serial killer!!
i love that idea, and the ending made me wonder whether grandpa killed the grandkids or made them live in fear of him for the rest of his life and theirs

Eerie and really fun to read! It seemed like a funny expression at first, but then it got pretty serious. Very well written. :)