(Long overdo comment... sorry) Awwww.... this was incredibly sweet. I thought it was so sweet how Kagome went back to Inuyasha after all that... *sniffles*
Good job. Just one little thing I noticed.
Sitting in the bed, she relieved the graduation ceremony, trying to persuade herself that she was happy.
Shouldn't it be relived, not relieved? Just what I thought...
Again, good job! Here's a virtual hug for being awesome~ *Hugs*
I loved this. It is really good! I'm a massive fan of Inuyasha! Goodluck in the contest! I entered it too. My oneshot was about Sesshomaru and Rin. :D xx
Awwww.... this was incredibly sweet. I thought it was so sweet how Kagome went back to Inuyasha after all that... *sniffles*
Good job. Just one little thing I noticed.
Sitting in the bed, she relieved the graduation ceremony, trying to persuade herself that she was happy.
Shouldn't it be relived, not relieved? Just what I thought...
Again, good job! Here's a virtual hug for being awesome~
*Hugs*