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  • Moonlit Serenade

    Moonlit Serenade (100)

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    (Long overdo comment... sorry)
    Awwww.... this was incredibly sweet. I thought it was so sweet how Kagome went back to Inuyasha after all that... *sniffles*

    Good job. Just one little thing I noticed.

    Sitting in the bed, she relieved the graduation ceremony, trying to persuade herself that she was happy.

    Shouldn't it be relived, not relieved? Just what I thought...

    Again, good job! Here's a virtual hug for being awesome~
    *Hugs*
    October 19th, 2009 at 11:58pm
  • Bob Dylan.

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    I loved this. It is really good! I'm a massive fan of Inuyasha!
    Goodluck in the contest! I entered it too. My oneshot was about Sesshomaru and Rin. :D
    xx
    October 5th, 2009 at 06:48pm