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“Brendon and I love each other.” Ryan said shortly.

That line made me felt something, but I don't know what.

"...Then you can live in the guest room with Will.”

“Over my dead body.” Ryan snapped.

“Will’s got tits.”

“He’s got a dick.”

“He’s right here.” the sophomore said, amused. He glanced at Brendon and fought his laughter. “And he’s got better taste.”

“Hey!” Brendon cried defensively.

I love everything. Includes how Ryan and Brendon act.

Apparently she had pissed God off when she yelled ‘motherfucker’ at that tailgater earlier because now both of them were sitting in front of her.

“You have tits!” Pete shrieked defensively.

“Sexual discrimination!” Pete cried, pumping his fist in the air.

“Brendon and I love each other.” Ryan said shortly.

-giggles- that was awesome!
your an amazing writer!
*subscribes*

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i love how you write
it's amazing

I've read a lot of your stories, and I really really like how you write.
Especially your Rydens -giggle-
I like this one a lot
William

STFU Thanks.:

Jon got stuck with them because Pete’s failed seduction attempt amused him to the point of no return. Literally.
^ this line had to be my favourite. (:

I really love this, but everytime you use 'drug' as in the past tense for drag (I think that's what it is), I get confused. >.<

i agree, isn't the past tense of drag 'dragged'?

i really love this story, post more as soon as you can!

susie x

Jon got stuck with them because Pete’s failed seduction attempt amused him to the point of no return. Literally.
^ this line had to be my favourite. (:

I really love this, but everytime you use 'drug' as in the past tense for drag (I think that's what it is), I get confused. >.<

Nice.

i find it disturbingly easy to imagine william beckett dressed as a girl... i think it's the fantastically vivid descriptions =D

basically, i love this story and i want moooorrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeee!!!

*subscribey!*

susie x

Holy hell,
okay so this is like my new favirote story.

There are so few fics with crossdressing in them so this is a nice change.Espcially because of my drag fetish
It's so unique and your characters are just so lovable. There were like so many parts in the story were I could not stop giggling.
I hope you can update soon. =]

Shit... first slash I loved in my whole life. :XD Love it. I love the part when Will and Pete are 'arguing' about his dick and tits. :tehe: Your descriptions are amazing.

your writing amazes me

“Miss?” William glowered. “Just because I dress like one doesn’t mean I want to be one.” William leaned over and kicked Pete. “I’m going to fucking kill you. Get me drug in here to get called a girl.”

“You have tits!” Pete shrieked defensively.

“These shirts look stupid without tits. I also have a dick, in case you’ve forgotten.”^ I don't know if that was meant to be funny or not, but I laughed. I like your wording with it. You word it like a real student would say - especially now-a-days when 'fuck' is every other word, or some other word adults don't like. But other than that, that part helped me know what went on in the first chaper.

From just that one chapter, I got a good sense of your character's personalities. I felt like I actually have met them almost.
If I were to say your descriptions were fantastic, you'd be having deja vu because obviously a lot of people agree.

This part is coming from someone who rarely reads sex scenes - you have talent. Really. You're not like half of this site who don't put any emotion. You have the emotio plus more. I really can't put words to it.

What I liked most about it was how I did have a sense of knowing what was going on without reading the chapter before or the summary. That's what I like about your writing - your characters are always real, and I know what's going on if I just hop in.

another nice one Dru! hopefully more soon?

wow! i love this! id forgotten about it until i got the email saying it was updated =] im so glad i subscribed [=

This is pretty stinkin' amazing : )

That would be tremendously interesting if they made a sex tape.I can just imagine how much money they would make for selling it. Which reminds me of a video I watched today with Ryan and Brendon

"If you could make a sex tape with any celebrity , who would it be?" -interviewer.
"Ryan Ross."-Bren.
: )

The socks.. I want to buy a pair now.. lol
and then Bren, Ry, Pete and Will doing that... I can most deffiantly picture that..

The four of them should make a sex tape... sorry, random not having to do with your story, but they should.

I'll subscribe

I like how they all just start participating in getting Pete off.
I really like Brendon and Ryan in this, not just their relationship, but how they act in general.

My favorite lines:

Apparently she had pissed God off when she yelled ‘motherfucker’ at that tailgater earlier because now both of them were sitting in front of her.

“I don’t know. Like five or six?”
“Nine."

Brendon’s lips formed a pout. “Mine.” he whined, trying to shove William’s hands away.

- claps -
I don't know what to say.
It's great, I giggled and I really can't wait for more.

This story owns. : ]

Jesus, Bren.” Jon said, rolling his eyes. “Just tell them you don’t want to be a lawyer. Better yet, tell them you’re gay. Then you can live in the guest room with Will.”

“Over my dead body.” Ryan snapped.

“Will’s got tits.”

“He’s got a dick.”

That among other phrases made me lol. There was one that stuck out for me, but I am too tired to remember it/look for it >_< Forgive me please...I always seem to review your stories at 4am. Anyway, lovely story, as usual. I am not really a fan of Pete or Wil Beckett, but this story roped me in, much like your Panic! ones have. Your writing style is strangly fascinating; so simple in the wording and descriptions- like effortless- but the emotions behind the words are so visible and complex it makes the story run almost like a movie would- I guess. I am probably not making much sense, but I am trying lol. Anyway, I am definatly subscribing to this one. ^_^

Updated.
1758 words.
Sex.
Rating changed to NC-17.
Gabe will be introduced next chapter.