Truly, Madly, Deeply - Comments

  • wendy darling

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    This definitely was one of the cutest things I have ever read. It was so sweet, and adorable, and had a happy ending (which I'm a sucker for.) The descriptive writing is so good, you can imagine just how Allie looks in your head. The flashback section was so adorably sappy (in the best way possible). I liked the way this turned out. Beautiful.
    January 12th, 2010 at 06:25am
  • Joker Of Crime.

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    One Shot for One Shot.

    Awww, so cute. (:It was a simple happy ending that was done well. I could hear the song Truly, Deeply, Do playing in the background as I watched the story play in my head.

    I, along with the above commenters, would like to know a little more about Ben and their encounters.

    I still loved it, though. Good job. (:
    November 5th, 2009 at 03:01am
  • craic queen

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    One Shot For One Shot.

    This was very well-written. It did have a fairytale-ish element to it, but I really liked it. I'm a sucker for happy endings. :tehe:

    I'd just like to see more things pan out from them first meeting to the blind date to...perhaps the proposal. It seemed a little rushed. I'd have liked a bit more detail in Ben, as well, but it's just a personal preference.

    It was a very good read and I enjoyed it a lot. Great job! In Love
    September 20th, 2009 at 01:06am
  • Rocket Queen

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    I honestly think this story was a little rushed. I did like the ending, though where they got together and it seemed almost like fate had brought them together. Like the person above me said, it had kind of a fairytale-ish element to it.
    September 14th, 2009 at 05:57pm
  • malkin.

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    Oneshot for oneshot.

    Aaaw. This made me smile. It was one of those stories that just flow so nicely, are all happy and comfortable and just... In Love That kind of stories that makes you wish stuff like this happened in real life (or at least to me). The whole story has this naive, fairy-tale-ish atmosphere, if you know what I mean? The and-they-lived-happily-ever-after kind of atmosphere? The instant connection, the coincidence (or ~fate, if you will :tehe: ), the marriage at the end.

    And it's not bad thing at all, I think it fits the story well. At least I did enjoy reading it a lot. :arms:
    September 10th, 2009 at 07:05pm