wow... depressing... please update again... PLEASE... i want to find out what happens... PLEASE?? it is soooooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update???
kissage! and major lol at jon being too 'mature' i've never been to chuck e cheese (i'm english) but we have a mcdonalds with a play park i once got chucked off...
Errgh. I'll update soon(ish). I was reading over the chapters, and I noticed all the english-ness. Hah. Adverts. Mr without the ".". Mate. But I kept it, because it was english-y. But that's all I had to say... good chapter by an amazing co-author, though!