August 16th, 2012 at 03:56am
@ losing control.
Yeah, I know the beginning seems like a cliche >.< I'm working with a friend of mine to tweak that. Most people that said the same thing about ch.1 say that it completely turns around from ch.2 and on, so I hope you continue to read the story :) I'll be working on a new chapter and the edits for the first chapter in the mean time.
I must admit I don't really find interest in the mythical/fantasy type things and also there are a lot of vampire type stories on here so I try to avoid them. BUT I really like your story, it's actually interesting, I"m on chapter 3 and I'm liking it, I'm going to continue reading of course, good job. I like how Natasha jumps back and forth from English and the Irish language. I also like the photo banner's you have of the characters. :)
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