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  • Flower_Child

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    Comment swap brought me here!
    I must admit I don't really find interest in the mythical/fantasy type things and also there are a lot of vampire type stories on here so I try to avoid them. BUT I really like your story, it's actually interesting, I"m on chapter 3 and I'm liking it, I'm going to continue reading of course, good job. I like how Natasha jumps back and forth from English and the Irish language. I also like the photo banner's you have of the characters. :)

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    August 16th, 2012 at 03:56am
  • mercuryskullbunny

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    @ losing control.
    Yeah, I know the beginning seems like a cliche >.< I'm working with a friend of mine to tweak that. Most people that said the same thing about ch.1 say that it completely turns around from ch.2 and on, so I hope you continue to read the story :) I'll be working on a new chapter and the edits for the first chapter in the mean time.
    August 10th, 2012 at 10:43am
  • losing control.

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    Well then, that was a pretty intense first chapter hahaha. I got this story on comment swap and it's definitely not something I would normally read. It seemed a bit cliche from the summary, like a vampire arranged marriage situation that you see all the time on Quizilla.

    It was written fairly well though, I couldn't find any grammar or spellin issues and your dialogue was written well. Of course, I only read the first chapter so I'm not sure how the rest of the story looks. I''d just say make sure it doesn't end up too cliche and you'll be good to go. :)
    August 8th, 2012 at 05:05pm
  • emberangel09

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    Favorite story of all time! Wish the rest of it was up!!
    August 4th, 2012 at 01:26am
  • mercuryskullbunny

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    Wow, thanks! Yeah, it might only have a few stars because it's not fanfiction (that seems to be the most popular category here). I'm so glad you like it though!

    My beta is editing the next chapter while I'm writing the one that follows, so hopefully I'll get to update soon.
    January 15th, 2011 at 01:44am
  • Old Seoul

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    Wow. I cannot believe this story only has a few stars. It is absolutely amazing. The creativity, originality and the way your characters aren't too extraordinary makes this story safe from going overboard. I love how many myths and make-believe things have been incorperated into this story.

    This is by far the best story I have ever seen on Mibba.
    November 13th, 2010 at 02:58am
  • Mercy78

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    really great story!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
    July 23rd, 2010 at 11:05pm
  • morganvillevamps7

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    I LOVED IT!!!! Update soon. Please? Subscribing!!!!
    May 14th, 2010 at 03:45am
  • mercuryskullbunny

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    Aww thanks for the comments BlackAshes! I'm really glad you like my story that much ^_^ I haven't updated in a while because both my beta and I have been really busy with school and stuff, but I'm working on it again :)
    January 24th, 2010 at 03:49am
  • BlackAshes

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    Your banner's are beautiful by the way =)
    December 27th, 2009 at 07:08am
  • BlackAshes

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    No way. You're on Mibba! ! ! =D
    I just went on Quizilla to go check up on the sequel, and then I came back here and thought about searching for this and gave it a shot. I didn't actually think you'd be on here!
    I've been reading this story since.. I can't even remember! I always wanted to comment, but Quizilla made it very difficult for me to.
    Ahhh, I'm so happy right now, you've got no idea.
    I can't wait 'til you post the rest of the story. I just love everything about it, from beginning to end! <3333
    December 27th, 2009 at 07:06am
  • lazydancer

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    Great update.
    I can't wait to see where this goes!
    October 18th, 2009 at 08:31am
  • mercuryskullbunny

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    Aww thanks! I'm really glad you like it ^_^ Next chapter comes on friday :)

    I use photoshop cs2. I've been making my own banners for years.
    October 12th, 2009 at 10:44pm
  • lazydancer

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    This is really great.
    I can't wait for more!

    Fairy Tale asked a good questions, what do you use to make the banners? They're so good.
    October 12th, 2009 at 10:45am
  • Fairy Tale

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    This is good. :]
    You really breathe life into your characters, and that's hard to find on Mibba...

    The banners are beautiful, too. o.o What do you use?
    October 6th, 2009 at 04:55am
  • mercuryskullbunny

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    Thanks for the complement Jenna ^_^ Maybe I'll change up the layout after I post a certain amount of chapters though. Just to keep it fresh :3

    And thank you too wake.the.dead ^_^ I'm not sure what kinda stories are posted here, but I'm glad mine isn't like the others. And thanks for subscribing too! That means a lot to me ^___^
    September 19th, 2009 at 05:36am
  • wake.the.dead

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    I'm loving the Irish vocab and everything. :] I can already tell I'm going to love this - it's definitely something I haven't read before. Keep up the great work! I already subscribed. :]
    September 18th, 2009 at 11:59pm
  • xCydonia

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    Everything's great!
    The story, the layout, the banner..
    Especially the banner. It's all sparkly and pretty. +__+
    xD
    So glad to see this on here now. :)
    September 16th, 2009 at 04:50am