Ick, I had this superly duperly long post thing but the darnthin refreshed the page and I lost it all -__-So I'll just aim for a shorter version... I love your writing style. You go into great details and everything. Amazing talentsss(: I really like how the boy to girl relationship thing is sort of reversed here.. It's sorta expected a bit in this type of story I guess.... I dunno, but I really like it. Can't wait to read more!(: -Chris
I like your storie. I'm glad you had it to where Seth was the one with an abusive father instead of Jamie. Most stories the girl is the one with the abusive father.