Don't Let Me Down - Comments

I've been looking for a good Arctic Monkeys related story for a good 20 minutes now. This was worth it ;)

Awwww, this story was so cute and very well-written. And I l LOVED the fact that it had an happy-ending - I haven't seen many stories around here that do. xD

As I said, it was very well-written. Your characters were very believeable and you could really tell their personalties. I also thought you described everything really well - It wasn't over the top description like so many people do, but it was just right, just enough deatil in my opinion. I agree with what others have said though - I would have liked more description about Hannah's appearence. But you put her personality across PERFECTLY!

This was a really lovely thing to read, I enjoyed it. =)

I'm really sorry I haven't been able to comment on this. School's kept me really busy. :\

This was great! The writing was really good, and the ending made me smile. (:

I was on One Shot For One Shot, and saw you.
I really, really loved this.

You write so wonderfully! I am extremely jealous. :XD

I think I'm gonna read more from you, now<3

I thought this was cute, and really sweet. I liked the way you wrote it, and I liked his persistance.

It was a lovely thing to read (:

One Shot For One Shot (:

For the last time, Alex,” she said, spitting out my name. I flinched slightly. “I want you to jus t leave me alone.” - 'jus t' should be just. I don't think you should made 'she said, spitting out my name' and 'I flinched slightly' two different sentences. It disrupts the flow.

Aw, the way they met was so adorable
I love how persistent he was and, even though she just kept rejecting him, he'd still go up to her apartment to ask her out :3

Overall, I think this was really lovely. I would've liked to see more descriptions, but I still enjoyed it (:

One Shot For One Shot.

This was really well-written. The details in it were wonderful and lifelike.

The only thing I would've liked more of was of Hannah's appearance. Of course, it's just a personal preferance, but I couldn't really picture what she looked like, sans for the eyes. I would've also liked a bit more description of Alex, but it might just be that I don't know the fandom. :shifty

It was so well-written and the plot, while slightly cliche, was superb. I could imagine each scene, it was so descriptive.

Great job! :cute:

I'm so happy someone wrote something about Alex Turner, even though it's only a one-shot.
I really liked this as well :D