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  • Taylor;

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    The wedding with Tanner and their best friends was perfect. They wrote their own vows and had all the people they wanted to be there.
    Wonder if they did stay home with Tanner or take him on their honeymoon.
    Can't believe Tanner's already one but, good idea to wait to have another one when they're still learning with Tanner.
    I think the idea of Zach wanting a baby girl to take care of and raise was adorable.
    April 1st, 2010 at 10:13am
  • Jessica;

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    You updated!
    That was a perfect wedding.
    And I repeat, Zach Parise will be a wonderful father.
    They should have more babies but maybe in another year.
    Abbie was right about the attention towards Tanner decreasing substantially if they have another baby right away.
    More soon. <3
    April 1st, 2010 at 05:12am
  • TSPensGirl89

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    I like it. Don't worry about the jumping thing it get's hard once you get a certain amount of chapters in and the characters start having families.
    April 1st, 2010 at 05:09am
  • kare_bear

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    so cute girl!
    tanner is unbelievably adorableee
    and i can't wait for more parise babiess!!
    hehe <3
    update this soon!
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:37am
  • the smitten kitten;

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    WOOOOT
    amazing update
    as always :D
    March 19th, 2010 at 08:55pm
  • PensRock

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    So I'll tell you. THe title of this chapter alone is heartbreaking. Thanks Bri! LOL

    My eyes took int he green and blue Olympic decorations, the various USA fans around me, Tanner's full head of brown hair, anything but the way Zach was bending over at the waist, wiping his eyes. - - Awww I know. How hard wa sit to see him like that. Poor Zach.

    But knowing that they were an amazing team didn't take away the pain I felt when as I watched them with the gold hanging around their neck. It made me slightly ill to know that the USA had worked so hard to get here and only won silver, something that was still an accomplishment, but left little fulfillment in the eyes of the hockey players. - - This hits so close to home. Trying to be happy for the Canadians who are friends and players that you love and respect, but feeling like someone hit you in the gut at the same time. In any other sport the silver is something to be celebrated. For hockey it's just a lost game. Like a lost stanley cup, it's a lost gold medal. Sad but true.

    He's going to be very upset, but if he says anything stupid; please tell me you won't take it to heart. My son may be prone to nasty words when he is upset, but don't let that discourage you from marrying him. - - this just seems so true about Zach. I'm glad his mom tries to comfort her.

    "I'm sorry, Tanner. I'm sorry I didn't get you the gold." - - I swear this made me teary eyed. I really think Zach did the right thing removing himself from his family. It had to be really hard for him and for them, but it was a very mature thing to do. Taking time to heal before calling, all smart decisions. I'm glad Abbie was secure enough in their relationship that she handled it as maturely as he did.

    It burns and sucks, but I'd take my silver over no medal any day."
    "Thatta boy, Zach." I smiled softly, running my hand through the side of his hair. He turned to me, lips poised for a sweet kiss.
    "And I also realized how incredibly lucky I am to have you in my life." - - so glad to see Zach back to his old self. Lovin on his fiance and kid. :D

    Yay!!!! Moving the wedding up. Yay!!!! I can't wait. And then more Zach Parise babies right? Wooo Hooo.
    March 6th, 2010 at 01:33pm
  • penschick8771

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    seeing Zach sooo upset had me in tears i felt horrible

    but great update as always loved the new chapter : ) keep up the great work
    March 6th, 2010 at 07:50am
  • Jessica;

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    *Sigh*
    Way to break my heart all over again, Brianna.
    Seeing Zach on Sunday was difficult.
    Aside from Miller, he was the most upset.
    I think you did it good, though.
    Sorry, I'm too lazy to quote right now.
    But you already know how much I love this.
    More soon?
    <333
    March 5th, 2010 at 07:12pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    March 5th, 2010 at 01:42pm
  • Taylor;

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    I know what you mean about the game too, they interviewed Miller like right after they got their medals and you could see him wiping tears away when he was leaving. That game was heart breaking but, I respected both teams beyond belief. My heart did wrench reading the Olympic part in the story, bought back the feelings.
    Anyways, I think it's good that Zach had the road trip to clear his mind from the loose. No one even saw Team USA as a threat entering the Olympics but, silver is pretty good. Gold would have been amazing. Can't wait for them to get married, thinking that Tanner would want a baby brother/ sister soon. Tanner is precious, sad to read about him during the gold medal game but, so heart warming to read about him watching Clifford and finally having his little teeth poke through.
    Can't wait for more. Update soon, please.
    March 5th, 2010 at 10:35am
  • TSPensGirl89

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    I love this story so much!
    March 5th, 2010 at 07:53am
  • roxy278

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    Omg that gold medal game was so hard to watch I literally forgot to breathe the entire game. I'm still suffering from Olympic fever it was crazy here. Canada winning was bittersweet for me yeah Im proud of my country but the USA deserved it just as much seeing Zach so sad broke my heart.

    Yay for moving up the wedding date!! =]
    March 5th, 2010 at 06:22am
  • gurlygirl87

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    aww very cute!!! Can't wait for the wedding!! More soon!! :)
    March 5th, 2010 at 04:44am
  • kare_bear

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    ugh so sweeeeeeeeeeet <3
    i'm excited for them to finally get marrieeeed!
    and i think it's about time they had another baby... jussayin.
    can't wait for more! <33
    March 5th, 2010 at 04:41am
  • TSPensGirl89

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    seriously I freaking love it! I'm so glad I got a new laptop so I can read stories again:)
    February 26th, 2010 at 06:50am
  • Jessica;

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    You've got me convinced that Zach is going to be the best father ever.
    If only he was reproducing with me.
    Except his fiance is gorgeous so I can't hate her.
    Anyways, you know how much I love this.
    I won't repeat myself.
    Don't make me wait 455654 weeks before you update again, please?
    <333
    February 24th, 2010 at 02:17am
  • the smitten kitten;

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    Haha yeah, that wasnt really how the canada game went, they pulled marty and I Parise assited an empty netter I do believe or something :P
    but whatever.

    cuuute update
    February 23rd, 2010 at 09:33pm
  • PensRock

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    I swallowed loudly, letting my little boy enjoy the screams and flashes of cameras as I tried not to upchuck my dinner. - - I felt a little like this when I watched and I don't even know the man.

    That came from the tattoo he had over his heart with Tanner's name in scrawled letters. - - OMG how adorably sexy is Zach having a tattoo like this.

    ach's blades chomped into the ice, bringing him closer to Martin Brodeur his hands stick handling quickly. He did a quick fore hand to back hand once he got close, ripping the shot high on his blocker side. It hit the back of the net and I screamed loudly - - I totally like your version better. Rafalski didn't need both of those goals. LOL

    "Daddy misses you so much even though you're right here." He whispered softly as I smiled, tears pressing against the back of my eyes. Watching him with Tanner was so sweet. It was the way he cared more about his son than anything else; hockey never, ever got in the way of Tanner Parise. "I love you buddy. I'll see you soon, okay? You won't even have time to miss me." - - Zach is the most adorable father ever. I love the way he is with Tanner. So freaking adorable.

    Can we get married first?" I asked him, pointing a the ring on my left finger.
    "Of course, only five months." He winked.
    - - YAY!!!! Can't wait for the wedding. I knew you'd give me a wedding. THANKS!!!!!

    "I know," Zach responded as Tanner wrapped his hand around his fingers squeezing tightly. "But he is only the first of many." Zach winked at me as I widened my eyes, giving him a look. - - I knew Zach was going to want tons of kids. :D

    There were so many awww moments in this story. It was hard to pick just a few to quote.

    Love Abbie - how emotional she got during the game.
    Love Tanner - and his gummy smiles
    Love Zach - because he's Zach Parise, because he's playing for his country, becuse he may be the most attractive man on the planet, and because you've made him such an incredibly amazing father.
    Love Weddings - 5 months, can't wait
    Love Zach scoring a goal during the Olympics. Can you make it happen for real now?

    How about you not make us wait so long for the next update huh? Are you working on it yet? HE plays tomorrow you know. LOL More please.
    February 23rd, 2010 at 04:53pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    February 23rd, 2010 at 01:19pm
  • Rylie_

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    I love this story so much it's not even funny.

    The way Zach reacts to Tanner is adorable. He's such a good dad. I can't wait for them to have more lil ones :D
    February 23rd, 2010 at 12:57pm