I'm really sorry, I have never done this putting a story with more than one chapter up on a website. Long story short, it isn't finished yet, cross your fingers and it will be there soon.
thanks guys! yes I know it is not really a fanfic, but the idea was to write something plausible that stayed true to the story and fanfic was just the closest word. I will work on the second part now, I always get a friend to edit stuff for me, as I find that really helpful, so the second part should come out by Saturday maybe? as school has started back and is crazily hectic.