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  • Jim Steele

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    Thank you!
    Yeah, I felt like I needed to show the other side of the superhero world, I mean, not ALL of them can make it, right?
    March 17th, 2010 at 03:47am
  • tmwall

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    Amazing story! Very good development. I love that you never really wrote "he was killed pretending he was a superhero," because that's not the story. It's so much better coming from Hybris's point of view. He is Hybris. Very well done.
    March 15th, 2010 at 04:29am
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