Point of No Return - Comments

loved it~

I liked this chapter, though I have to say I was a little confused as to why the vamp. just sort of let her go in the middle of taking her when her sister came to interrupt. Im guessing it was because he didn't want to arouse suspicion, but it was a little confusing--just so you know.

I loved everything else about it though. The emotions in this version are really really raw, and you do a great job of getting them across to people. Keep it up Anna~

i love your story

Yuppers, I was pretty much envious of Esme. But it was in my head, so I felt kinda voyeur-ish in their intimacy. Bad me.
He is the embodiment of Lust and Sex and everything Forbidden.
Mmmmm. Cookie.

*Faints*
Much, much, much, much better than the Quizzila attempts!
I loved it! And Mr. Seth might as well be the embodiment of Lust.
Yay for boredom inspirations!

So we've discovered Shaileigh is silly.
That chapter five was awesome. I loved it!

Yeah, I will continue the sequel.
I also love this new version of PNR. It's feisty!

Ooo, I like the new version Anna.
I hope you still do the sequal to it that you had on Quzilla?

thanks!
good update!

littlemissSmileZ:

nice new improvement!
haha
if you haven't read my books please do

Thank you. :)
I will when I can.

nice new improvement!
haha
if you haven't read my books please do

VERY GOOD! EXCELLENT!

I love the prologue and will read the first chapter as soon as you change the font color. it's too dark and I can't see.

Daughter of the Moon:

I like this too. Keep wrting.
P.S. I hope you can look at my story, Dark Secret, so maybe you can tell me how to improve my writing skills. ^^

sure, i'll take a look. Thank you!

I like this too. Keep wrting.
P.S. I hope you can look at my story, Dark Secret, so maybe you can tell me how to improve my writing skills. ^^

littlemissSmileZ:

ooh! I really like this! keep it going! :mrgreen:
*suscribing*

Thank you.
It's old but improved. :)

ooh! I really like this! keep it going! :mrgreen:
*suscribing*