March 24th, 2008 at 06:03am
Whoooa. I knew it would be good, just from the title and proper grammar.
You have a great vocabulary and an amazing imagination.
The Harry Potter thing...I was not expecting that. Wow, thank you for writing this.
Really.
This was completely unexpected. And amazing.
It was just...amazingly well put together. The whole story was seamless, everything worked, and I loved it.
Good job