The One Who Always Listened - Comments

When you said Harry Potter. I thought like...Harry Potter.
This was completely unexpected. And amazing.

It was just...amazingly well put together. The whole story was seamless, everything worked, and I loved it.

Good job

Whoooa. I knew it would be good, just from the title and proper grammar.

You have a great vocabulary and an amazing imagination.

The Harry Potter thing...I was not expecting that. Wow, thank you for writing this.

Really.

This is...interesting. I almost wondered if it's a true story because it makes so much sense. I really like how it wasn't centered around Harry Potter, because you could have very easily fallen into that rant. I'm glad you didn't. :mrgreen:

OMGGG COMMENT SWAP!
Lol jkjk.
Here's my comment, which I'm slappig myself that I didn't do earlier.
I. Love. It.
I love you idea, like I told you when you were speaking to me about it. I love how Harry is in a psych hospital because he's "crazy" -and I love how JK took advantage of his vulnerability like that.
You didn't state obvious facts but you still got to the point, which was awesome...

His blue eyes... - THEY'RE GREEN!

... mental institution renown for holding incurables... - I loved that line, I don't know why, it just kinda stood out for me. Calling them 'incurables' made it kindof eerie, like they really did have no hope.

Well, perfect, like you.

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Pretty good, i love the twist at the end, I never expected that it would be J.K. Rowling. I can only think of one thing wrong with it at the moment, J.K. Rowling's first name is Joanne not Joan, other then that it was great.

amazing, the suspense really built up on me! It was dark and yet it was sweet, it had a certain tinge to it that almost made paranoid schizophrenia okay and innocent asmuch as it is disturbing. it also makes you look at Rowling in a different light, almost as if she is a thief of worlds, the world the boy had made up. I really liked it with the detail and almost soft flowing format. hooray for you!

Wow.

Can you say 'amazing'?

Anyway, it was well written, and a great read. Wonderful wording in some certain parts. And the ending just came out of nowhere; nice surprise.

All in all, I loved it.

Wow. Just, wow.
I was reading, and though I knew it had to be HP related (I did a search), I couldn't figure out where it would pop in. And then, it started to dawn on me, about, three seconds before the last sentance.
It was a beautifully written one-shot, definitly one of the better ones on here.
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I did not see that coming.
But first off, the review. :)

The concept was brilliant, with you following the boy's life, his spiral into insanity, through the years and the psychiatrists's eyes.


Blacked out for hours at a time he would awake to spin marvellous tales, raving of battles between good, evil, triumph, loss and love. He became isolated from his fellow students when they mocked him, eventually refusing to tell his stories to anyone but her, the one who watched him through the tinted window now.

Beautiful wording in that paragraph.

It was such an enthralling journey, the plight of the boy who was too lost in hiw own imagination trapping and heartbreaking, but also with a sense of a realism.

And... wow.
That freakishly original JK Rowlig spin just did it for this story.

Sorry for not reviewing sooner.

Prince Charming:

I saw the ending coming, but was thrown off by the "bue eyes" - aren't Harry's green?

But ... Wow. It was tragic and beautiful.

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I didn't want to say green because the book focuses alot on the similarities between Harry and Lily's eyes and it would have given it away to quickly.

Dmn you Ash for being to smart. :XD

i love it!

I saw the ending coming, but was thrown off by the "bue eyes" - aren't Harry's green?

But ... Wow. It was tragic and beautiful.

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That's amazing.
I love it.

Okay, I did comment but it didn't show up... :shock:

Emma,
Yes, I've already told you how brilliant this one-shot is, but i've decided to express my love for it a little more considering it's such an awesome story.

I love the fact that the ending is so unexpected, I really didn't think it would end with J.K.Rowling, considering stories like these usually end up with some kind of lovey romance thing happening and the characters falling madly inlove with each other. :tehe:

An excelent one-shot, very well written and extremely super sonic awesome!
I adore it :D

Love electrically,
Tony.

ooohhhhhhhhh thats freaking awesome!
I LOVE IT!

thinking about genius, you sure are! =] that rocked!

My first new story in ages.

Thanks to those who helped me edit it!

Let me know what you think.

xoxo