Sick - Comments

  • sectumsempra

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    This was such a raw, powerful piece. The little tidbit about people looking inside windows made me smile; I do it as well, and never see anything. And yet, my mother also has the same sort of paranoia. I adore the way this was written; like a stream of conscious thought, almost, connected by the same theme. Being sick, sick of yourself, sick at the sight of yourself. I know those feelings of self-loathing only too well, and the personal nature of the story really enhanced the strength of the emotion. Staring into the mirror, feeling so disgusting and wishing something was different, something would happen, that the mirror was lying. I respect you so much for writing this; it honestly was gorgeous; it really brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.
    August 15th, 2010 at 04:12am
  • ProjectAlxisRose

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    Oh My Gosh! This is beautifully written, I feel blessed to be able to read this. Your writing has changed so much!
    November 3rd, 2009 at 06:23am
  • erin.whatserface.

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    Wow. Is exquisite even the adjective for it?
    If I think of something better, I'll let you know, but for now that'll have to suffice.
    Because this was beyond good.
    So raw and honest.
    I thoroughly applaud you.
    Sorry I didn't comment on this before.
    <3
    October 7th, 2009 at 12:24am
  • See.

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    That was amazing.

    And possibly something I relate to all too well.
    Well done!
    September 20th, 2009 at 07:09pm
  • voldemort!

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    Wow.
    I can really relate to that, to that feeling of self-loathing.
    Of not being happy with yourself.

    It was really good.
    I'm glad you asked me to read it. (:
    September 13th, 2009 at 11:44pm
  • Heart.In.Ohio.

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    That was good, rea;lly good.
    Very well writtem; you shoulod be proud. :D :lol:
    September 13th, 2009 at 02:07pm