WOW! This is really good!
September 17th, 2009 at 11:49am
Oh my gosh... This is absolutely incredible!
First of all, props to you for having such a unique and creative plotline! You had me on the edge of my seat the entire way through, and I had no idea what to expect. That is definitely good thing, I'm glad it wasn't the usual cliche that goes with anorexia.
And well done on your perception of Spencer! For having no idea who he is, you could've fooled me! I really like how you brought in his ability to play drums into the story, very awesome and it was so cute how he played them for her (:
The emotions in the story were great, I got a real good feel of the thoughts going through his head, that was brilliant. And I really loved how there was a happy ending, because I am a sucker for that ^_^
And congrats on having it in so far ahead of the deadline! I am impressed!
I think this is really amazing, great job!
Good luck! (: