The Life She Deserves - Comments

Oh, cool. This is the first entry (so far) involving suicide.

Mm, anyway, that was good, except you need to work on your tenses (past, present). Keep them constant - it's bad grammar.

It was short (the shortest entry I've read so far) and sweet. Good job. x]

wow that is so powerful, when i saw the tittle i thought it was an anti abortion story but really it is the mother that kills herself. That gives a really different interesting spin on such a dark situation. Very philosophical. Well done.