I honestly don't know what to say. This was very poetic in a sense that was somewhat overwhelming. Your style was definitely your own. The descriptions were beautiful and elegant in many ways; I can’t even count on both hands. At times though, I did find myself getting lost in your words and that wasn’t so much a good thing. I think your prose was a little too strong for me, but I did however, love the concept of seeing someone who is beyond beautiful that you could just write a song about them, so that made me smile and you do have a way with words as well. This was lovely.
April 24th, 2011 at 09:52pm