Shadows in the Night - Comments

magnificent darling....
hahaa. that was a good update
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i think she should kick him in the face and run....
but save her friend first and that boy
update soon!
por favor
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hahaah that song was so delicious it makes me wanna hug a baby! haha thx for the story comments:))

hahaa. it makes babies cry...... like that song made me wanna hug a baby!
good update!
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who are these creepy people in cages? i would never have friends like that!!! my friends are much coooler and wouldn't get caught.... hahaa jk. te amo my bestest amigo!!!! my spanish skills are improving! and i liked the update!!!
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The very first chapter of this book actually happened to me and my friend and it inspired me to write this. Thankyou so much for your support:) It means a lot to me

Who are the people?! I want to know! I"m loving this story! keep it up...I'm extremelly intrigued, and I want to know if you're going where I think you're going with this. Write on girly! Can't wait for the update :D

Thx everyone:) and ist is semi-based on a real experience. The first chapter of the book actually did happen to me and my friend not too long ago. Hard to believe right? But ya, it did lol

This story is bomb. That's all I gotta say. It's is like, based on a personal experience? Or completely made up? Either way, it rocks!

I hope you don't mind some constructive critiscism. I have a feelign I'm going to sound like a hypocrite, but lets see how this goes. Um...your story is really good. It has potential. The only problem I had when reading it was the few misspelled words that were scattered throughout the whole story. You also missed a few words in sentences, but that's not a biggie as long as its words that are mainly fillers. But the one thing that got me was the first chapter...I believe it was the second paragraph or so. You were being repetative in using the word us. I know sometimes it's really hard not to repeat words, but try not to use words (like us) more then once in a sentence. Instead of saying us you could have said the two girls, or I'm assuming they're sisters? That or I got the characters mixed up and that is NOT your fault...I have some problems with keeping characters straight. But other then those few minor details, that got to me, your story is extremely good, and it would be amazing if you continued it.

its really good i liked it!