At Fault. - Comments

xshallowxbayx (105)

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I love this story. It's so raw and not overdone like some other abuse stories that I have read. Good work!

May 10th, 2010 at 10:41pm

hiyaitsjackie (100)

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thanks!!!!

September 18th, 2009 at 12:03am

the ghost (100)

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what you wrote fit well with the picture:D, with him hitting her and the glass falling, well written and I think he had the right to be angry, even though he went a bit far when he hit her:D:P

September 17th, 2009 at 08:49am

equilibrium_ (100)

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:D I liked the emotions you displayed in this story and how you wrote it, though I think the change went a little bit fast...but it was good anyways :D

So, well done!

But could you please make the story section a bit bigger? :)

September 14th, 2009 at 02:23pm