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  • the beekeeper

    the beekeeper (150)

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    holy shit!!!!!!!!!!!!
    i did not see that last one cominggg
    wow.
    i loved the way you wrote it
    with the him her pattern
    only one bad thing to say
    too many brand names
    axe ralph lauren etc..
    it distracted me
    but other than that
    AMAZINGG
    September 14th, 2009 at 02:53am
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