When I Look At You - Comments

  • Losing.Hope.

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    I want you to know I hate this so far...
    I don't actually hate the story... I hate how sad it makes me.
    But I love this so far...
    May 23rd, 2011 at 01:02am
  • abz

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    i loved this!! nick was such a duche for letting her sit there for an hour!!!
    November 9th, 2010 at 12:46am
  • call;me;biles

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    Just finished reading this story and I can't wait to get started on the sequel. You are absolutely amazing. :)))
    July 4th, 2010 at 07:53am
  • CharminsArmy010

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    Loved the Story Cant wait for Sequel
    May 24th, 2010 at 01:56am
  • Fly.With.Me

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    AHH I can't wait for the sequal,I think that maybe Nick was in a car accident or something and I have a feeling that Faith will find out and feel horrible or somehting on those lines :)

    Put the sequal up soon PLEASE PLEASE
    May 23rd, 2010 at 04:05pm
  • MindlessDreaming

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    Oh my gosh! Great job!! I loved it!
    Somehow your story caught me and I couldn't wait for your updates!
    I think Faith and Nick are getting a divorce!! They should, Nick's been a total jerk! He doesn't deserve her! Joe does! I want him out of the way ;D xD He doesn't have the right to deprive Joe from being happy if he REALLY loves Faith :)
    I think Faith finally realized she should be with Joe :) I hope!
    Can't wait for the sequel!!!!!!
    Post it soon! Please?!?!?!

    -Giselle :)
    May 23rd, 2010 at 06:41am
  • yellowjellybean14

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    unbelievably happy that there will be a sequel, and i hope after you get out of school you can update often with long chapters hate it when you are unable to update often. even though nick treats her bad and she has feelings for joe i still am rooting for nick. i really want them together more then i do with joe.
    May 23rd, 2010 at 04:39am
  • starting to believe;

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    NICK ANNOYS THE BALLS OFF OF ME. If I had them..but seriously. wtf, asshole.
    He better be in a ditch or something unconcious, because that would be the only legit reason.
    Anyways, he can fuck up their marriage. Because it's obvious Faith and Joe are the ones that are supposed to be together anyways. Screw morals.

    <3 Love, Rachael.

    PS. Sequel!!!!! As in....soon. :)
    May 23rd, 2010 at 03:56am
  • Nanook

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    Oh my gosh...! I loved the final chapter! Yay, I'm glad there's a sequel, because that wouldn't have been too nice if you ended it like that, lol. Oh my gosh, you need to post it though, like, now! I want to know what happens! I honestly have no idea on where to guess where Nick was, other than maybe he was held up at work again...? I was also thinking as I read that that maybe he found someone else too, but that's just what I'm thinking. I think she chose Joe because he's the one she's able to lean on when she's upset, and she wasn't thinking about all that had happened earlier, just about who she wanted to be with after all of it. I honestly don't know how Nick's going to make up for this one, seriously. If things keep going the way they are with their relationship, I do believe that Joe and Faith will end up together, but I've believed that since the beginning. Wow, this is probably the longest comment I've left for this story, but it's the end, and you asked a lot of questions, so... yeah, lol. Please post the sequel soon, I honestly can't wait to read it. This story was amazingly written and I'm glad there's a sequel. You've been an amazing writer since the beginning, and I'm sure you will continue to be. :D
    P.S.- Sorry for this extremely long comment. Thanks for taking the time and reading it. :)
    May 23rd, 2010 at 03:33am
  • we were infinite;

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    A SEQUEL. HELL YES. :D
    Hmm.. answers to the questions:
    ~Where do you think Nick was?
    Work. Idiot.
    ~Why do you think Faith chose to go to Joe's instead of Kevin and Danielle's?
    Joe's the most amazing guy in the entire world.
    ~Do you think anything is going to happen to Faith and Nick's marriage?
    DIVORCE.
    ~Do you think anything is going to happen between Faith and Joe?
    MARRIAGE. Or at least, dating.

    I CANNOT wait for the sequel. Hurry! :)
    May 23rd, 2010 at 01:14am
  • BSMSGIRL08

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    WOW! I love this story and yet it seems so realistic.. like i could imagine Nick doing something like that eventhough i don't think he would.. but he is soo in to his work.. and to answer one of your questions i really do think she is going to leave Nick,, If i were her eventhough i don't really believe in divorce.. i would leave him! But i wouldn't have married him in the first place if i felt something for Joe! (; can't wait for the sequal!! Please hurryy! lol (:
    May 22nd, 2010 at 11:38pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    May 22nd, 2010 at 07:13pm
  • Lon3lyangel

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    Wow. That was an amazing final chapter. I honestly don't know where Nick was. There's only two possibilities of where Nick was. He either was still at work or out with another woman or worst case scenario, he's dead from a car crash. I'm so lost and confused that it's not even funny. I think Faith went to Joe's because she was closer to him than Kevin or Danielle. I'm not sure if anything will happen to Nick and Faith's marriage but if she divorces him, that's understandable (if he's still alive). I don't know why, but I have a feeling in my gut, that things might go further than just a kiss between Joe and Faith. Thanks for updating. =D Please write the sequel soon. I'm definitely subscribing to it.
    May 22nd, 2010 at 02:08pm
  • mck

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    First let me tell you: AMAZING. A sequel YES!!! I also think Nick was working and forgot, because work is so important to him. She went to Joe because there is a connection and she can always talk to him. I also think that the marriage is going to fall apart. I can't wait for the sequel.
    May 22nd, 2010 at 01:21pm
  • crookedsouls.

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    Yesss, a sequel!
    That makes me so, so excited!
    That chapter was amazing.
    Nick is a douche.
    Alright, so I think Nick was at work or cheating on Faith.
    Of course Faith went to Joe's, IT'S JOE!
    Haha.
    I think there will be even more tension between Faith and Nick in their marriage, but I'm not sure about them falling apart.
    And I would love if Faith and Joe started seeing each other secretly, but if not, then I don't know what could happen.
    Haha.
    Can't wait for the sequel.
    May 22nd, 2010 at 09:52am
  • bloomsky

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    i was really happy to see the last chapter is out sooo soon..!
    can't wait the for the sequel..:)
    and i loved the ending of faith being in joe's arms..they are just perfect for eachother..:)
    i think faith should realize it now that nick is not worth for her..!!

    you are an AWSOME WRITER Steph..keep it up..!!
    May 22nd, 2010 at 09:40am
  • jesstierney

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    OHMYGOODNESS.
    Nick is such an asshole. I can't even believe he stood her up when he planned the ENTIRE thing! What a douchebag. Ugh and JOE! I feel so bad. I thought the part when faith hugged Dani was super cute and just...cute.

    Uhm, I think that something is going to happen with the marriage. It's just...if Faith and Joe get together, like what the heck is that going to do to the family? There is no way that they can be like "oh hey, we're going out. here are the divorce papers nick." NO WAY. So I don't know...maybe they'll have an affair!!!!

    Can't wait for the sequellL!!!
    May 22nd, 2010 at 08:44am
  • alice liddell.

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    Can't believe Nick stood her up D:
    Well he better have a good excuse in that case!
    I loved the ending when Faith ran into Joe's arms crying.
    And that last paragraph was sooo... beautiful :)
    You're a great writer.
    Can't wait for the sequel :)
    May 22nd, 2010 at 08:22am
  • bloomsky

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    aww...!! can't wait for the last chapter...!!!
    what's going to happen..?? i just hope that joe and faith end up together :]
    hope ur next chapter is AZAMBELLAS..!
    May 21st, 2010 at 07:00pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    May 21st, 2010 at 06:10am