When I Look At You - Comments

  • CharminsArmy010

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    loved the update
    May 21st, 2010 at 01:58am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! Aw, Joe kissed her! But Faith was... upset? I don't know, because you haven't revealed her thoughts yet, but I can't wait to find out what she thinks. And aw, the next chapter is the last one. :( I can't wait to read it though; I want to know how this story ends! :) Can't wait for it! :D
    May 21st, 2010 at 01:35am
  • yellowjellybean14

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    i am so sad to see this story coming to an end i love reading this and will miss reading new chapters. will you be working on a new story after this if so what is it about, i just might have to read that too. lol
    May 20th, 2010 at 05:34pm
  • mck

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    You did it again. Another amazing chapter. I feel so bad for Joe, He really must think that he screwed things up. I hope they end up together. Sequel please, please, please.
    May 20th, 2010 at 02:21pm
  • alice liddell.

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    Great update!
    May 20th, 2010 at 02:11pm
  • crookedsouls.

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    Oh my gosh.
    No! No! No!
    Faith isn't supposed to leave.
    Joe is supposed to kiss her and they live happily ever after.
    Ah!
    I'm so stressed right now.
    Haha.
    Can't wait for the next chapter, even though it is the last.

    P.S. Are you considering a sequel or no?
    May 20th, 2010 at 05:59am
  • MindlessDreaming

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    Loved*
    Btw, I demand a sequel!!!
    I think everyone wants a sequel so... Write one!
    :)
    May 20th, 2010 at 05:45am
  • MindlessDreaming

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    Ahh I loves it!!!
    Great chapter!
    I just hope they end together! I'm pretty sure that's what's gonna happen!
    So... Update sooonnn pleaseeee!!! :)
    May 20th, 2010 at 05:44am
  • jesstierney

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    JOE KISSED HER!!!
    I never thought he'd actually do it. Well I did because something has to go down since it's almost over! UGH. I seriously love your story so much. I'm going to be so sad when it doesn't come up in my email anymore. SIGH.

    Anwyay, greaaat chapter. Love Charlotte, like a lot.
    Nick's an ass, per usual.
    May 20th, 2010 at 05:33am
  • starting to believe;

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    I imagined Kevin dressed as Fred Flinstone and laughed.
    Which is cool, since Im in my room by myself with no one around me. Hahaha.
    Anyways, I love this chapter! and I'm going to miss this story. :)
    May 19th, 2010 at 03:03am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    awww :]
    May 18th, 2010 at 03:06am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! Aw, even though Nick didn't say I love you back to her, when he said ditto it reminded me of the movie Ghost. :) Did you think of that as you wrote that? :) I loved their costumes, it was cute hoe Nick picked them out. So now Nick's starting to be the nice guy again. I wonder how long this will last...? Joe showing up with Charlotte, talk about drama. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update as soon as you can! :D
    May 18th, 2010 at 12:40am
  • ilyjnaman

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    stay with nick stay with nick stay with nick!!!!!!!!!!
    May 17th, 2010 at 11:03pm
  • Lon3lyangel

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    Only 2 more chapters? :( I don't know what's going to happen. Thanks for updating. Please update again soon.
    May 17th, 2010 at 06:35pm
  • mck

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    Not sure how you will put it all together in 2 chapters. I would like to see Faith & Joe together. I am not sure what the DITTO was about with Nick but I still think he needs a kick in the butt for treating Faith like he does. Love the story. Hope there will be a sequel.
    May 17th, 2010 at 02:43pm
  • crookedsouls.

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    'Ditto', Nicholas?
    Really? What a douche.
    She should just be with Joe anyway.
    I have ways to get Charlotte out of this picture.
    So two more chapters?
    That makes me sad.
    I love, love, love this story!
    Any sequel ideas or anything?
    Can't wait for the next update.
    May 17th, 2010 at 01:15pm
  • debba8255

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    what is going to happen? well I would like to see her and Joe together. But, I don't know how you are going to do that in 2 chapters. I love Nick too, but, I think she belongs with Joe!!
    May 17th, 2010 at 01:02pm
  • alice liddell.

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    Great update :)
    May 17th, 2010 at 11:14am
  • jesstierney

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    BAHAHAH.
    I love how she's all "Im mad at you joe" and now joe's confused and Idk, ijust loved that ending bit.

    I can't wait to see what happens.

    updatessoonaspossible though i totally understand the not updating thing. School sucks and it can go die or something.
    May 17th, 2010 at 06:32am
  • debba8255

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    please update soon, really miss this story!!!!!
    May 6th, 2010 at 11:16pm